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Aaliya's avatar

Such a beautifully nostalgic piece! It really captures the essence of simpler times and the warmth of family gatherings.

Mark ✌️💙🫂's avatar

Thank you for reading. I appreciate your kind words.

Aaliya's avatar

You are welcome my friend

Be Budding's avatar

Oh, I truly love this poem, Mark. Somehow, it carried me back to those warm summer evenings of my childhood, when I would play soccer with my older brother in the backyard after dinner. Then we’d wander back into the living room — completely exhausted, yet deeply content — feeling satisfied after another beautiful, carefree day.

Mark ✌️💙🫂's avatar

Thank you for your kind words, and happy that it also resonated with you.

Hina Gondal's avatar

Nostalgic I love this

Marlana's avatar

This doesn’t feel like wanting the past back. It feels like missing who you were inside it. That hit.✨